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 May 23 2004, 09:29 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
as the stars beam light onto the optic lense of mine
i peer across the plane to where the roses grow divine. twards the sun they spurt. feasting on morning dew they resemble me as i grow fond to you drawing closer in persuit of your epiphany i would sail in dreadful waters without cavelry the signs on this oddysey warning me :wrong way! but this heart of mine can't help it. i must disobey. i just threw that together in a few minutes. how am i? |
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May 24 2004, 10:59 AM
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it sounds good to me, keep it up lunchbox!
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ryfitaDF "oddysey" May 23 2004, 09:29 PM
Kathleen persuit - pursuit
cavelry - calvary
Other than th... May 24 2004, 10:57 AM ryfitaDF QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 24 2004, 10:57 AM)persui... May 24 2004, 02:10 PM Kathleen Oddysey* I spelled my own things wrong.
Eh...yea... May 24 2004, 05:06 PM ComradeRed QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 24 2004, 10:57 AM)persui... May 24 2004, 06:52 PM ryfitaDF QUOTE(ComradeRed @ May 24 2004, 6:52 PM)I thi... May 25 2004, 04:28 PM Kathleen QUOTEI think he means cavalry, as in horse soldier... May 25 2004, 06:40 PM ComradeRed QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 6:40 PM)Either ... May 25 2004, 06:41 PM
angel-roh hehe yea u spelled some words long, but i guess it... May 25 2004, 07:52 PM |
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