The Five of Us, A poem. |
The Five of Us, A poem. |
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![]() Fryd ev ed ec risyh? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 139 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 393,584 ![]() |
This is a poem I wrote a year ago about me and my best friends splitting up.
It's kind of corny but tell me what you think of it. THE FIVE OF US It started two summers ago, When the new girl came. We became friends, Friends, who were supposed to go, Through anything Another girl and two boys Came to be To make the five of us. We were the best of friends, Ones who you could trust. We talked about the things to come. We did not know The group would soon be Five minus one. One of us was leaving Not for forever But it seemed that way He was going Far, far away. You do the math Three girls and one boy Is the sum And none of them knew What was to come. We all stayed The best of friends But all best things, come to an end. We had fights Name-calling and bickering Insults, stabs in the back. We never got What we had back. After that we fell apart Maybe it was because The first boy moved away. It had affected us all In a way. What if he didn't move away? And he stayed. Would things be different? Or would they be the same? What if we didn't have those fights? I wonder that everyday. Would eveything be all right? Or would they be the same? I don't know what happened to us But that's all right As I move on with life I know that my I can trust And in my heart Will always be The Five of Us. |
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Eternal Syn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 ![]() |
I liked, it seems heartfelt, I would vote but there's no just "liked it" on the poll because it's better than okay but not enough to be I loved it.
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