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The Five of Us, A poem.
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Paulina
post Apr 14 2006, 03:40 PM
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This is a poem I wrote a year ago about me and my best friends splitting up.
It's kind of corny but tell me what you think of it.

THE FIVE OF US
It started two summers ago,
When the new girl came.
We became friends,
Friends, who were supposed to go,
Through anything

Another girl and two boys
Came to be
To make the five of us.
We were the best of friends,
Ones who you could trust.

We talked about the things to come.
We did not know
The group would soon be
Five minus one.

One of us was leaving
Not for forever
But it seemed that way
He was going
Far, far away.

You do the math
Three girls and one boy
Is the sum
And none of them knew
What was to come.

We all stayed
The best of friends
But all best things,
come to an end.

We had fights
Name-calling and bickering
Insults, stabs in the back.
We never got
What we had back.

After that we fell apart
Maybe it was because
The first boy moved away.
It had affected us all
In a way.

What if he didn't move away?
And he stayed.
Would things be different?
Or would they be the same?

What if we didn't have those fights?
I wonder that everyday.
Would eveything be all right?
Or would they be the same?

I don't know what happened to us
But that's all right
As I move on with life
I know that my I can trust
And in my heart
Will always be
The Five of Us.
 
 
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Ekay
post Apr 14 2006, 09:46 PM
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I liked, it seems heartfelt, I would vote but there's no just "liked it" on the poll because it's better than okay but not enough to be I loved it.
 

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