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 Apr 4 2006, 11:51 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
layin my head down, closin my eyes
till the pain hurts too much,for my tears to run dry ive held you so dearly i kept you so close wishin you were here when i needed you the most walking down memory lane as it echoes in my head the words that you've whispered fades and becomes dead ill walk in the rain and ill drown in gods tears forgive me for my sins ive done over the years just to see you smile, will make everything right just to know your here and to hold me so tight relieve me from this agony ive learned to live theres more for me there than what i have to give im tired of feeling lonely, im tired of pain im so sick of wondering whats there to gain ive should've known in the beggening when it started to dawn i have to open up and realize that your already gone |
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Apr 13 2006, 07:45 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Right when I started reading, I knew it was you, Michael. Come back!! You're brilliant. I love how you're so sensitive. Beautiful poem.
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dispn0ygonekrazy now that your gone Apr 4 2006, 11:51 PM
razbus I love the direction of the poem, but I think that... Apr 5 2006, 01:42 AM dispn0ygonekrazy lol sorry for the bad english, kinda use to writin... Apr 5 2006, 09:23 AM razbus No, i get it trust me. I have to correct myself ev... Apr 5 2006, 12:07 PM lidoxangie --------- Apr 8 2006, 09:16 PM Angelina Taylor Good ideas, good imagery. I always say this to asp... Apr 9 2006, 12:17 PM dispn0ygonekrazy lol i dont always rhyme if you look at my old post... Apr 10 2006, 06:52 PM
Angelina Taylor QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Apr 10 2006, 7:5... Apr 11 2006, 03:43 PM dispn0ygonekrazy QUOTE(Paradox of Life @ Apr 13 2006, 5:45... Apr 14 2006, 12:51 AM Paradox of Life OMG. I'm hurt!! My name's Katt as ... Apr 14 2006, 09:22 AM |
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