Where we are, beginning of a story I'm working on |
Where we are, beginning of a story I'm working on |
Mar 30 2006, 01:12 PM
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I've had this idea of a story in my head for weeks but I couldnt figure out how to start it. I've got something but I'm not sure if it's good. CC please. I need it badly!
He was just a person. A person with flaws and imperfections that showed everyday. He had more friends than one would expect him to have. His father was a rebel and most stayed away from them and anyone associated with them. His favorite color was blue. Blue for the sky, blue for freedom. He himself had never tasted freedom but he imagined it was sweet or perhaps sour. He even thought it might taste like everything. It could, right? It could taste like the rivers that branched through his country; it could taste like the peaks of the mountains that stood higher than anything else. It could taste like the emerald hill that he was standing on right at this moment. A light breeze pushed past him without any regards and caused the leaves on the trees to spray in all directions. One of them landed at his feet and refused to move any farther. It was fall and the leave was, well, green. The rest of the leaves were glorious colors. They were rich reds and oranges; yellows and the often forgotten brown. He picked it up and twirled it casually in his right hand. He placed it in his coat pocket and patted it softly. |
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Apr 7 2006, 10:51 PM
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Caitlinnn Where we are Mar 30 2006, 01:12 PM
Caitlinnn Can someone pleassse read this? Mar 31 2006, 10:04 PM
Ice Cream 4 U Well, I'm just hoping that isn't the end o... Mar 31 2006, 10:18 PM
Caitlinnn Thank you and I'm trying to write more Apr 1 2006, 12:45 PM
Caitlinnn A short, quick update
‘O’er the hills of crimson ... Apr 5 2006, 09:59 PM
shes out Ohhh . It's good :). One question, what's ... Apr 6 2006, 03:18 PM
Caitlinnn Thanks It's constructive criticism Apr 6 2006, 04:31 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK I really really liked that. Keep updating. Apr 6 2006, 07:51 PM
My Cinderella. I love the image you set in my mind. Please, conti... Apr 6 2006, 09:23 PM
Caitlinnn Thanks everyone
Yeah and if anyone's a gra... Apr 6 2006, 09:58 PM
tcunningham1589 in the last part, "she finally did..." s... Apr 6 2006, 10:02 PM![]() ![]() |