Play with Scissors |
 Apr 1 2006, 04:18 PM
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Play with Scissors
She grasps the scissors holding it like a dagger satisfied that the curve in the scissors were made specially to fit her small hands she takes the scissors It traces long white paths against her skin teasing twirling and dancing against her skin the skin playfully springs the blade back up you cant get me they seem to taunt It traces long white paths against her skin dreaming of the red rivers it can create how it longs to break something in all this perfection a rip or just a tear a tiny jab maybe the girl holds the scissors eye level snip snip snip she holds them like chopsticks as the hungry jaws open wide snapping hungrily at the empty air it seems to want to take a greedy bite at those curious eyes she holds it the cold steel blade vertical to her stomach just like how her mother had done it 3 years ago she looks down the scar is still there the scar from when the beak and taken its hungry jab the scar from when her mother had held it vertical like now now the scissors gawks holding its breath at the flawless perfection a sea of tender skin and longs to dive right in again her hand moves up feeling the cold steel blade she holds it dagger-like again how far will you go? She asks (it returns an icy smile as she feels the stainless steel blade plunge in again sorry for the darkness..its based on true story..and its not perfect..i need to fix it the stuff in ( ) is b/c i dont know know where to/if i should put it: (stainless steel blade it says it flashes a smile under the light as she turns the scissors but the tips of the blade are already stained 1 inch high with old blood) |
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Apr 4 2006, 02:11 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
QUOTE She grasps the scissors holding it like a dagger satisfied that the curve in the scissors were made specially to fit her small hands ^Beautiful way to open this poem. QUOTE now the scissors gawks holding its breath at the flawless perfection a sea of tender skin and longs to dive right in again amazing. Explore and try new words so it doesn't start sounding redundant. You have a lot of talent, keep writing! It's beautiful |
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ecargnmyst Play with Scissors Apr 1 2006, 04:18 PM
Ice Cream 4 U I really am loving this poem, its just perfect. As... Apr 1 2006, 06:49 PM Paradox of Life That was beautiful. However, the word 'scissor... Apr 1 2006, 07:03 PM Flavored Condom Grace that was beautiful! Quelle extravagant... Apr 3 2006, 05:42 PM ranniel Hi grace! ^ yen stole my words. Apr 3 2006, 08:52 PM
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