As I lay dying.., -cuts- |
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 Mar 27 2006, 10:06 PM
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I'm just another LIFELESS CORPSE
SUICIDE is my only option Life is PAINFUL DEATH is painless CUTTING is my doctor -swishes hair- I CRINGE AND SCREAM AS I'M BURIED INTO THE PAIN AND ANGUISH RIPPING OPEN MY HEART THE BLOOD SPILLS ON THE FLOOR POURING AND POURING I LAY THERE ON THE DESK TRYING TO MURMUR MY LAST FEW WORDS OF THE PAIN YOU CAUSED, OF ALL THE HELL YOU PUT ME THROUGH  I've capitalized words that make this "poem" sound emo. -eCuts- |
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Mar 29 2006, 08:13 PM
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 no news is good news...  Group: Member Posts: 123 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 232,063 |
holy hell, that's emo :P
good job QUOTE(illumineering @ Mar 28 2006, 3:30 AM)  As I Lay Dying is the title of a William Faulkner book. That's not an emo title. It's also an emo-screamo band. 
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Apr 1 2006, 07:05 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
QUOTE(xstab.my.heartx @ Mar 29 2006, 7:13 PM) holy hell, that's emo :P good job It's also an emo-screamo band. As I Lay Dying isn't emo-screamo... it's a Christian band labeled as 'hardcore'. But I hate that word too much, so I'm just going to say hard rock. I just don't believe it's emo. And that was a very emo poem. -cries and eCuts- |
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chaneun As I lay dying.. Mar 27 2006, 10:06 PM
juliar omg thats really good
5 stars! Mar 27 2006, 10:07 PM anqie word. it's real good cause i wrote the last 4 ... Mar 27 2006, 10:08 PM chaneun ^Well are you emo like me?
NO! Mar 27 2006, 10:08 PM nightmare4taki RE: As I lay dying.. Mar 27 2006, 10:08 PM Smoogrish shut up christine, i'm more emo than you are. ... Mar 27 2006, 10:10 PM smearedmakeup OMG, this is hilarious.
*eCuts a heart on my wris... Mar 27 2006, 10:14 PM shes out Ew, EMO.
Do people even know what it is? NO!
J... Mar 27 2006, 10:26 PM ecargnmyst lol..my writings also dark and "emo" but... Mar 27 2006, 10:47 PM illumineering As I Lay Dying is the title of a William Faulkner ... Mar 28 2006, 03:30 AM Blow_Don't_SUCK ^Christine is ignorant.
Christine is this about ... Mar 28 2006, 04:13 PM
zomgznoway Christine, you're the next NY Times bestseller... Apr 1 2006, 12:36 PM |
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