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 Mar 28 2006, 06:10 PM
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 daughter of sin  Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134  |
Isolation.
Hatred, control. Freedom. Impossible future and dreams of perfection. Inspirational lies buried in your thoughts; less colour, less power. Frozen emotions, so still in the air, like tiny miracles yet to be reborn. Close your eyes, slowly, yet consciously, and forget. Inevitable failure, or a challenge. Reflect. Unrealistic, unbearable - your story. -- Taylor`` A 2-minute poem.. I need criticism. |
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Mar 29 2006, 02:48 PM
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 wut wut in the butt? Group: Human Posts: 2,108 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 227,723 |
^I agree with them, but I also liked it cuz it was like a collage of random thoughts going through your head
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Angelina Taylor Transparent Mar 28 2006, 06:10 PM
shes out Sure? It has an unclear message. But I love it no ... Mar 28 2006, 06:43 PM Angelina Taylor Yeah I figured :P
It's just about someone ref... Mar 28 2006, 09:32 PM Ice Cream 4 U I agree with nikki, it has an unclear message, but... Mar 28 2006, 09:37 PM
Angelina Taylor QUOTE(Ice Cream 4 U @ Mar 28 2006, 9:37 P... Apr 1 2006, 10:49 AM xstab.my.heartx it's good Mar 29 2006, 08:14 PM Ice Cream 4 U ^Is that all you ever say? "its good" ?? Mar 29 2006, 08:18 PM |
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