it Rhymes!!!, originally written for Suneet in a matter of 5 seconds. |
 Mar 26 2006, 10:19 PM
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i stare up at the sky
it almost makes me cry as the flakes fall in my eyes i hear talking guys one of them sighs the other one lies a snowball flies- that's not wise. |
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Mar 28 2006, 09:29 PM
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 daughter of sin Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134 |
Yeah.. try to write not just for the sake of rhyme.. This wasn't very original.. sorry :\
Taylor`` |
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xstab.my.heartx it Rhymes!!! Mar 26 2006, 10:19 PM
xstab.my.heartx I didn't write it to be original.
I was just ... Mar 29 2006, 08:16 PM |
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