please rate .. i just wrote it a few minutes ago, please ... |
 Mar 27 2006, 01:06 PM
Post
#1
|
|
 hes the reason i smile.. <3  Group: Member Posts: 104 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 158,486  |
deep in thought,
your on my mind, your all i can think about, your one of a kind. i love you now, and always will, i will do anything for you, i'd even kill . youre the one who, keeps my heart beating fast, the one who i can turn to, when i look at my past . the smile on my face, is because of you, if i werent with you, i dont know what i'd do. i just want you to know, that i love you with all my heart, you mean the world to me, nothing could ever tear us apart. ok .. so the capitilization isnt there .. but i just started .. tell me what u think ..any advice ?? |
|
|
|
 |
Replies
|
Mar 27 2006, 08:00 PM
Post
#2
|
|
|
victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
I don't think I can give you advice!
It was flawless, I loved it. One of my favorites. |
|
|
|
Posts in this topic
crazi_in_love_08 please rate .. i just wrote it a few minutes ago Mar 27 2006, 01:06 PM
fishcake-y Could you, like, use proper grammer? You're no... Mar 27 2006, 08:08 PM crazi_in_love_08 thanks Apr 2 2006, 03:19 PM sillakilla220 yeah if i was u id jus switch a few things. i wou... Apr 2 2006, 06:21 PM
Flavored Condom It's simple and cute. but I didn't like it... Apr 2 2006, 06:22 PM |
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: