flip it out and curl it down, tired & so out comes the natural high |
 Mar 23 2006, 12:15 AM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
my words are falling true
but they are not entertaining you and my eyes are not open so my lies are always broken when i contradict myself and i despise cotton candied whispers because they mean nothing in this place you told the meter to survive but you forgot to lace the taste and it's bittersour not bittersweet so pull the hands from pockets and greet the day with a firm handshake shake the dust from your behind you're collecting tools with foolish rhymes my hands are tied but thats okay i'm about to go to bed anyway. |
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Mar 25 2006, 01:24 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Wow, I really like this one.
Especially the message behind it. It really gets to me. That ending is great too, I looked at the last line as when you say on the computer, "alright g2g to bed" or something. Like it could keep continue the next day, goodbye for now, and what everyone says at the end of these convos. Great work as usual! I liked it before and after I read your meaning behind it, beautiful choice of words |
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RiddleMeWonders flip it out and curl it down Mar 23 2006, 12:15 AM
Ice Cream 4 U Ahg, that didn't really have a clear meaning..... Mar 23 2006, 11:06 PM RiddleMeWonders it's about myspace or anything internet in a s... Mar 23 2006, 11:36 PM Ice Cream 4 U ^Thanks. That really cleared things out for me. =D Mar 23 2006, 11:41 PM illumineering GAH!
What a telling reminder of all the time ... Mar 25 2006, 10:54 PM Phoenixx Beautiful way of describing the internet/myspace/e... Mar 26 2006, 01:16 PM
xstab.my.heartx I liked it.
I liked the meaning behind it. Mar 26 2006, 10:07 PM |
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