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Agh,, I'm writing this on the computer...might not be as good :\
IceCream4U
post Mar 23 2006, 11:12 PM
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Yeah...I haven't written this poem yet, I'm gonna start it on the computer. They're always bad :\ EXAMPLE: My "Bitch" poem.




Secrets.
Why do we have them?
Only to start trouble later?

Maybe its the intesity and fun
But really what does it come to?
Maybe a crushed heart?

But yet I still tell them,
I live with them
And breathe them in.

Hey, can I talk to you?
Sorry, you can't listen. Its private.
Are often heard words.

So now all these little secrets
Are causing segregation between us,
Our group.

So now when I do something wrong
A friend is blamed because they stick up for me and comfort me.
Maybe because they're mad at the person I'm mad at?
Why are they mad? A secret.
Yes, they are blamed.
And now I feel guilty, oh so guilty.

Why am I guilty?
Because I have a secret.
A dirty little secret.
And no, I won't tell you.



^^ See????
 
 
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KissMe2408
post Mar 25 2006, 01:20 AM
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lol it's not as bad as you think!
I can relate to this, and I like the simplicity of your work.
It's very..refreshing.

Keep writing!
 

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Ice Cream 4 U   Agh,   Mar 23 2006, 11:12 PM
KissMe2408   lol it's not as bad as you think! I can re...   Mar 25 2006, 01:20 AM
xstab.my.heartx   this goes with the theme "Secrets don't ...   Mar 26 2006, 10:13 PM


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