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Second entry<3 |
Mar 22 2006, 08:19 PM
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"I remember when you came with me that night, you said forever, you said you'd never.." The sound of intricate words mixing with my dreams, and I awaken to semi-darkness. Ruben, will you love me today? Immediately he's the first thing I think of, he never could. "You're such a wreck and now it starts to show.." Another song is heard in my mind, I repeat them in silence, they mean so much and I know. I turn the television off, oh, how I'd love to throw it off a bridge. I step into my balcony and welcome the chill, it runs through me like love. I arrive at the place, seven-thirty. Like always, there he is..I open my arms. He does not show the same affection before, and the rest of my day is burned down. If I noticed earlier how he meant so much, I'd have kill to make him jealous as he does to me. |
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Mar 22 2006, 09:32 PM
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"I step into my balcony and welcome the chill, it runs through me like love."
That line is impressive! I love it. The whole thing makes me happy to read because I like it so much but at the same time searching for hope because of how you wrote it. I really, really like your work =]. |
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