some things i wrote, for my love Options

[demonik187]

how could you think she was better
i chose you
im sorry it was hard to forget her
four years and two
you showed me the meaning of love
thank you
i even asked the man above
he said it was true
it was then i chose to forsake her
on my grounds
your feelings on pieces of paper
i found
it was you that i wanted always
no other
now crying is how i spend my days
im smothered
i'm sorry i just didnt see
too late
now its him your with not me
just great





im sorry for all the times you cried
im sorry for all the the hurt inside
i was mean
i was inconsiderate
im sorry for all the sleepless nights
im sorry for all the late night fights
i was immature
i was stubborn
im sorry for all the yelling loud
im sorry for all the acting proud
i was frustrated
i was pigheaded
im sorry for all the times i said no
im sorry for all the times you couldn't go
i was selfish
i was childish


how could i have been so blind?
it was right there in front of me
if only i would have taken the time
to see what you wanted me to see
If only i would have read the rhymes
i would know how you wanted it to be
For now i know what was in your mind
and the tears flow to form a sea
Why did i have to be so blind?
for now i see things perfectly
a love so pure a heart so fine
but now its too late for me
mistakes i've made these ties that bind
i sit and wait patiently
for the day when again you are mine
i will pray endlessly
How could I have been so blind?

[IceCream4U]

I love this-

As you know, its a little lengthy, but you use powerful words like "blind" and "sleepless nights" and "forsake" to keep the reader reading. I admit that when I first looked at this poem, I thought, "Ugh, too long. I'm gonna find a shorter poem". I'm glad I eventually read this one though!! Its really awesome, great job.

However, the use of the word "Blind" did get a little boring..