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 Mar 15 2006, 10:13 AM
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 Emo Fruitcake  Group: Member Posts: 76 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 382,761  |
I wondered when the tables would turn
You threw fire around Never knowing i wouldn't burn Now i have let it go So why can't you This is becoming more worthless Find something new to do I could never believe the words you said If lies were guns You would already be dead its not finished, but its getting there |
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Mar 21 2006, 10:48 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
^Me three^
I love the ending!!!! Better than mine! GOOD JOB!! WHOOOO-HOO!!! EDIT!! I just noticed in your (^) signature. QUOTE I can make skins very good, It's supposed to be: I can make skins very well, Well is for verbs, good is for nouns. Well is describing how you make; therefor its an adverb. Good is an adjective. Well is an adverb. Sorry, I can be a grammar brat about the stuff I know =P |
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Star27 ..... i dont know what to call it Mar 15 2006, 10:13 AM
xxxSiERRAxxx *waits 4 ending** Mar 15 2006, 07:30 PM scratchthisdown thats really good! i like it alot cant wait ti... Mar 15 2006, 08:05 PM Star27 I wondered when the tables would turn
You threw fi... Mar 21 2006, 06:56 PM Tribal J_Rome this would turn out to be a nice acoustic song. i ... Mar 21 2006, 07:03 PM ranniel Me too^. Mar 21 2006, 10:36 PM
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