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..... i dont know what to call it, 1st poem
Forgottenstar27
post Mar 15 2006, 10:13 AM
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I wondered when the tables would turn
You threw fire around
Never knowing i wouldn't burn
Now i have let it go
So why can't you
This is becoming more worthless
Find something new to do
I could never believe the words you said
If lies were guns
You would already be dead


its not finished, but its getting there



 
 
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Forgottenstar27
post Mar 21 2006, 06:56 PM
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Emo Fruitcake
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I wondered when the tables would turn
You threw fire around
Never knowing i wouldn't burn
Now i have let it go
So why can't you
This is becoming more worthless
Find something new to do
Im finding this so hard to beleive
I thought we were friends
Now you've left me to bleed
I've tryed so hard
To fix all of this
You didn't even listen
What did i miss,
Did you change your mind?
Do you not think of me as a friend?
Am i a waste of your time?
Now i just sit here and think that
I could never believe the words you said
If lies were guns
You would already be dead


its finished! laugh.gif Not my best. First one that I'm sharing with people _unsure.gif
 

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Star27   ..... i dont know what to call it   Mar 15 2006, 10:13 AM
xxxSiERRAxxx   *waits 4 ending**   Mar 15 2006, 07:30 PM
scratchthisdown   thats really good! i like it alot cant wait ti...   Mar 15 2006, 08:05 PM
Star27   I wondered when the tables would turn You threw fi...   Mar 21 2006, 06:56 PM
Tribal J_Rome   this would turn out to be a nice acoustic song. i ...   Mar 21 2006, 07:03 PM
ranniel   Me too^.   Mar 21 2006, 10:36 PM
Ice Cream 4 U   ^Me three^ I love the ending!!!...   Mar 21 2006, 10:48 PM


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