I am a writer, a poet, so yeah... |
 Mar 19 2006, 08:06 PM
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I just need some CC on this
The creamy, white paper sits beneath my world A catacomb of ideas and muse that begins with anything I am a poet, a writer I sing my words on scraps that to anyone else would seem meaningless and insignificant A fly that sits upon a wall and is like any other. My mind slips into its home, its place the letters I scribble form words, sentences, poetry They shape what I am thinking, what I am rebelling from I am a poet, a writer I gather my writings from some unworldly field A meadow where the flowers reek of innocence. I listen to the words on the page They are speaking to me They are what I am and what I will become I am everything that I write about Experiences from here and there I am writer, a poet. |
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Mar 19 2006, 09:40 PM
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I love it.
I really do. And there a few reasons why: a) I can relate to it, so well, that I think I'm going to take this and credit it you with it, claiming it as my favorite poem *for now*. b) It takes you inside and you can hear someone saying the words, and feeling them. c) It isn't perfect. It's your own style, it is a little uneven in format, but that's what makes it alive. Awesome. |
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Caitlinnn I am a writer, a poet Mar 19 2006, 08:06 PM
ranniel QUOTE(RiddleMeWonders @ Mar 19 2006, 9:40... Mar 20 2006, 08:10 PM
Caitlinnn Thanks you guys! Mar 22 2006, 05:10 PM Ice Cream 4 U Yeah, it was really nicely written..
I like this ... Mar 22 2006, 07:12 PM Caitlinnn Thanks! Mar 24 2006, 07:34 PM xstab.my.heartx Cute.
I liked it. Mar 26 2006, 10:14 PM |
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