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 May 21 2004, 08:03 PM
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So yeah, here's something that's actually not about depression or love stories.
Blood Thief By day, he stalks By night, he preys Endless nights Lonesome days Longing to walk in the sun As he devours the current victim, he asks "Why did I have to be the one?" Blood seeps through his pale fingers With a thud, she drops to the ground Even he sensed that her spirit still lingered Staggering onward, he looks to the sky Dazzling stars still danced; he was safe He lives forever, but still asks, "Why?" In a way, he's cursed for eternity At the same time, one would say he deserves it But many have not yet seen Oh how he loved to torture, and still does That's partly why he's this now A blood thief, just because... |
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May 22 2004, 12:39 PM
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 Liv's Secret Lover *shhhh*  Group: Member Posts: 201 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,229 |
Agreed! It's the kind of thing that makes you want to know so much who this guy is, why he was cursed to live forever, etc. Leaves the rest to the imagination. Nicely written.
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Kathleen Blood Thief May 21 2004, 08:03 PM
EmeraldKnight Awesome!!! Wow.. I've gotta say.. ... May 21 2004, 08:05 PM Luster Soldier That is awesome! I love the theme of this poem... May 21 2004, 09:26 PM orionpax ure poems are so visual. u could make a short movi... Jun 16 2004, 03:44 PM orionpax ure poems are so visual. u could make a short movi... Jun 16 2004, 03:48 PM Kitsune_black666 WAY TO GO KATHLEEN! ^_^ You never told me you ... Jun 17 2004, 09:51 AM Yemmerz Kathleen!!!! That was good~I'm... Jun 17 2004, 11:16 AM
Kathleen QUOTEWAY TO GO KATHLEEN! ^_^ You never told me... Jun 17 2004, 11:26 AM |
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