surreal, a colorization Options

[subway]

i tried to give like a futuristic, lot of makeup, kind of effect.
colorization:

original:


C&C

edit> I tried taking the advice.
i just redid the coloring on the face. is it too much?
im not satisfied with the right cheek. it seems empty.
fixed colorization:


edit>
i did another one because the rainbow wasnt working for me.

[Gigi]

I understand your concept but I'd just like to say that I don't see a whole lot of difficulty going on with a surrealistic colourization. So a more precise eye for details will balance things out. Watch out for things like the feathered green/purple part running into the eye and the bit of yellow that seeps into the ear.

Also, if you're going to use surrealism as a theme, try out some other blending options other than color. Try color burn, linear burn, soft light...all of those. They'll give you more interesting looking colourizations.

Oh, and also, I think the blue part would look better if it was on top of the green, running along the side of her face and a little across the temple. But that's just my opinion.