hes not so different, no , not poem :D a story<3 Options

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enjoy<3 & please give me some honest opinions & advice, im pretty much a beginner here.



HESN0TS0DIFFERENT
I almost collapsed. I didn't dare turn around when I heard his voice, calling to me? "Megan, can you give me the history notes from yesterday? I was absent." Was he for real? Hunter, asking me for notes. GROSS. But of course, I had to be nice. "Um, sure..give them back any time, alright?" but really, I wanted to say keep them & stay dead away from me. I know, Im shallow. But it's Hunter..a gothy freak who thinks screaming is music. Yeah, right. I didn't know him very well, even though he's practically in all my classes, and not just this school year but almost every other year since kinder. But this is the first time in SUCH a long time we've made small talk. "Thanks, see ya.." I didn't even reply as I gave him the papers, I walked away fast without turning my head. That night I told all my friends "Ew! Hunterrr..isn't he like Atheist?" They all giggled, including me. "Haha, who knows? WHO CARES!?" more laughter. I slept that night thinking about him, I remembered his voice, now also remembering how soft & shy it sounded. Was that how hardcore he was? And a part of me wished I didn't laugh about Jin's jokes..a huge part of me. I tried to shake him out of my thoughts, what the hell am I doing thinking about Hunter? A week past, & he was still on my mind. We never talked after I got my notes back, but I remember how happy I was to see Hunter, & I seperated the notes he borrowed from all the others. They were in his hands, his binder, his backpack. They deserved a special spot, not to keep the grime away from my things, but to keep grime off of it. I realized I formed a crush on one of the strangest people. Someone I never understood. What sucked was I gave him a totally bad impression when I walked off, he must've thought I was a complete snob. The next few days I'd watch him, laughing with his friends, tapping his feet, & something called "headbanging" as he listened to some more metal. Once he caught me & he gave a quick smile. I turned away embarrassed. My friends didn't know anything about this, not eve my bestfriend, Mina. This was a secret. The thought of keeping it hidden excited me & brought tingles all through my body. A couple of weeks later Hunter asked for some more notes, YES! I was so happy I rampaged through my bookbag, he laughed at my little stunt. "Cool." He said & ran off to join his group. I went to mine & was immediately woken up. "What was that?" Karla asked. "What?" I tried to take the dreamy look off of my face. "Are you hot for Hunter or what?" another girl asked. "Oh, god. She is!" Mina, ugh..she knew me more than anything. "Megan, are you crazy?" I was all of the sudden furious now "No! I'm not, yes I like Hunter & I don't appreciate you guys talking crap about him. He's not so different you know!" I didn't realize everyone heard, including Hunter..I groaned as he walked towards me. "Hey Megan, I was thinking maybe we could have a study date, yeah?" The redness faded from my cheeks & I quickly agreed. As soon as he left Mina talked to me "Look, Megan. We aren't like, judging your guy, alright? It's cool, we're just surprised." My cheeks flushed again, but I knew I shouldn't be angry, who wouldn't be surprised? I apologized for exploding & they all forgot, instead they were obsessing about what I would do with Hunter on our study date. I was so happy, I never thought they'd accept it if I told them about him. I used to think cliques just don't go out their boundaries, but I'm happy they can. Later in the afternoon as I was helping Hunter finish a question I looked up & noticed he wasn't listening. He was looking right at me, his dark blue eyes were lovely, his black long hair combed perfectly across his forehead, at that moment we kissed. "Wow.." I said "Thanks for seeing me in a new light, I never thought you'd feel the same way for me." We lasted throught high school. & Now we're going to college. I think maybe we'll make it through all the craziness.



Alright so it's not that great, I had to hurry to the end and I've probably made errors, sorrry. but what do you think?

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Haha, thank you :) i agree i shoudlve used more words and organized it.