When on a journey..., Inspired by "The Road not Taken" in 7th Grade. |
 Feb 25 2006, 01:28 AM
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When on a journy
Moving through fresh new plains One often comes across a path Simple and easy, the path is taken with confidence, and clarity The path is bright, new, and refreshing You are happy However one day, while traveling on the path You come to a fork The path branches off into two directions At the fork starts a wooded area As far as the eye can see, trees stand The path becomes more narrow in its dividing And one is struck with a choice Despite the constant progression on the path, One can only gaze for an instant One can see the turns before him Yet the end of either path is unknown Hidden deep within the forest One path will ultimately be taken And in this, the entrance to the woods will be lost emancipated from choice Regret quickly sits in What is beyond the other? [I was just looking through some really old writing I did. I don't really write anymore, aside from expository. But, since I had just recently been presented with really awful interpretations of Robert Frost's "The Road Not Taken," by an awful english teacher, I had to pull this up. Whatcha think? For 7th grade? Come on!  ]
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| *Blow_Don't_SUCK* |
Feb 25 2006, 01:36 AM
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^I'm in 8th grade yet I write better material than that! I even wrote better crap in 7th grade!
JOKING NATE i was joking! Nice choice of words. Nothing here is confused. Very fluent! And I like how it kinda gives you an imagery. propz Nate, propz |
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Feb 25 2006, 01:38 AM
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QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Feb 25 2006, 12:36 AM)  ^I'm in 8th grade yet I write better material than that! I even wrote better crap in 7th grade! JOKING NATE i was joking! Nice choice of words. Nothing here is confused. Very fluent! And I like how it kinda gives you an imagery. propz Nate, propz  You love me forever! 
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| *ranniel* |
Mar 1 2006, 08:12 PM
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QUOTE(Acid Bath Slayer @ Feb 25 2006, 1:38 AM) You love me forever! I'm guessing you have lots of strong relationships. 
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