i was inspired :) Options

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So, i read this story. it was amazing & i can't wait to read more of your work; iNyCxShort (;
pleease give me mmoooree<3 hahaah. it totally made me brainstorm this story.




"Go, Lianna," the words steady, cruel, "just leave.." Jake said it with such disgust. It was like something just went through her chest when she heard them spoken aloud. Lianna trembled and did as he said. She quickly turned her face away in embarrassment when she saw him glaring, and broke out in tears as he did the same.

They've been together for almost five months. Even though they both had longer relationships, they knew what they had was special. Something about his eyes made her shiver. She loved how passionate he seemed about everything. And Jake always thought of Lianna as someone he wasn't worthy enough of, and he was surprised on that day she had told him she wanted his promise of forever. Ever since, they'd walk hand in hand, fingers laced. In their school, kids would turn their heads to watch them go by, girls would always giggle in that girly way and whisper to each other 'They're perfect!', and the guys, they'd just nod their head at Jake. It was an approving nod, saying 'Hey, man. Good job. She's a keeper, yours.'

But today they got into an arguement. This was the first time they ever had a tone with each other, Lianna had signed up for the part of Juliet in the school play and got the part. Talented and beuatiful, Jake always thought, it didn't bother him that his girl would be kissing some other dude in an act. No, not at first. But when he found out who she would be kissing, that's when he tripped. Gavin Herst would be Lianna's Romeo. Jake didn't like this guy, not at all. But before all that, before he and Jake ever decided to see each other as non-existant people, they were great friends. It was Lianna that tore them apart. She always felt guilty about it, but Jake would assure her she was not to blame. Gavin always liked Lianna, and Lianna admitted to having feelings for him 'a little bit', too. Jake knew, and the moment his friend confided his feelings he promised himself he'd never tell him he felt the same for her, too. But that promise wasn't kept, Gavin asked Jake to help him out with her. Jake backed out on the offer but later got dragged into it anyway. As he and Lianna started talking and got closer, her feelings for Gavin faded and Jake forgot the reason he even spoke to her. A betrayal.


When Jake found out Gavin got the part he went straight to Lianna and asked her to drop the play.
"What, you want me to get out of it? Weren't you the one who said 'Yeah! I'll make sure to get you all on tape' " Lianna joked with him.
"But Gavin is Romeo."
"Oh, so this is what it's about..well, it's not like I'm gonna like the kiss."
"He would! Just please baby, for me?"
"I know, but I already promised I'd be they're star, I'm sorry. I'll be performing for you, th-"
"So? You can't just break one little promise?"
"Jake, you know me."
He did. She was hated to break promises, but more than anything upset others. She was loyal and true to her wores, friends, family, yeah, yeah..another reason he loved her. But in this particular situation, he despised her ways.

So the days kept coming closer to that dreadful school play. He'd be going of course, he wanted to punch Gavin the moment he got off stage. Seeing him kiss Lianna would be all he needed to tell if he still had feelings for her. Jake is never the jealous type, but knowing Gavin and Lianna did once like each other, he felt threatened. But at the same time he also felt, somewhat sorry. He knew he took Lianna away from Gavin, not the other way around. Gavin and him were still alright but just never the same after they started going out. He guessed Gavin probably felt like he broke the male code or something 'your guys before your bitches always'. So he made a decision to watch them rehearse, apologize to Lianna and set the past straight with Gavin.

Jake walked into the audotorium sweating and ready to run the moment someone called out his name. But instead there was his girlfriend, her hands carressing his ex-friends hair, and his arms wrapped around her tightly. Jake exploded. He turned away and stormed of, pushing away the hands that asked to for high-fives. It was just rehearsal, right? It couldn't be real. But to him, it looked as real as it could get.

And this is where we catch up on the story again. Lianna had been crying almost the whole afternoon, her coach thought it would be okay to give her a break form practice. Jake was running faster than ever, giving every step a much appreciated stomp. When track was over the two both ignored each other and went to their locker rooms. Of course, Lianna was the center of attention, her friends talking bad about Jake, saying he shouldn't have assumed crap. And Jake's friends hesitantly backed off as he got out of the showers. He was silent and furious. But remained calm the whole time. Until, he saw Gavin..

"I am disappointed. You two are acting very immature, I'm surprised at both of you. You're always so good, and you got along pretty well too! What happened in the showers today is untolerable. What were you thinking?"
"Ask him, he started it," Gavin scowled, trying to keep his now black eye from becoming even more swollen.
"I'm sorry, I-I guess I just lost it..I didn't mean for it to happen like this," Jake didn't mean a single word.
"Damned right!" their caoch was furious, "I'm taking you both off track, and any other sports you're in. That's right Mr. Herst, now baseball, and Mr. Neil, no basketball, football, soccer, ecetra! Now get out of my office!"

"Bastard." Gavin said intensely. Almost asking for another injury, "You know this whole jealousy thing is totally gonna make Lianna break up with you, hm..maybe you should keep it up."
"Shut up Herst! And stay away from my girlfriend. She doesn't like you."
"Heh, oh? The way she was all over me that day you saw us, seemed pretty obvious don't you think?"
"You know what, I don't even know how we ever started hating each other.."
"Well, you hit me, I hit you, yeah..it's quite a mystery."
"Way before that Gavin. I'm not talking about the way I beat your ass today, I mean when we were still alright with the whole both liking Lianna thing."
"I never wanted to hate you, you were like my best friend man, but you know how it is with us guys. Lianna.."
"I really am sorry.."
"Whatever Neil-man. Let's just stick to acquantances alright? And give me a break the next time you see me and Lianna kissing."




To be continued?..(:

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AH, grammar errors! Sorrrry ;_;

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AH, grammar errors! Sorrrry ;_;

Lmao, that's ok, i can read it just fine, ^don't double post.
I like this, i was quite inspired by your writing.