and you never heard Options

[alphanumeric]

you walked away when i needed you most
followed them as they all turned on me
you said you'd be back, that it was all an act
but i caught you with someone else
and you never heard me cry that night
deep inside as i was throwing you out
you apologized but i wasnt listening
the sorries were becoming endless
you stood at my locked door and made it clear you wouldnt leave
it tore me up the guilt i felt, you're loyalty to me
but how could i love you anymore?
you were never there for me and i found myself alone
you were the only one i had but it wasnt true
and you never heard me choke that night
the gun went off and you began to cry
if i were still there to hear you scream
i'd change every motion of my mind
im sorry, im so sorry..

ack. it's not all that good :] i usually make these things up as typing them. no wonder eh

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

I can see the story. I think it's pretty good.'

But I don't find beauty in it in any way (I feel so horrible saying that I'm sorry ) I say practice more, or read a variety of poems to at least get an idea of what it truly is.

[razbus]

I can see the story. I think it's pretty good.'

But I don't find beauty in it in any way (I feel so horrible saying that I'm sorry ) I say practice more, or read a variety of poems to at least get an idea of what it truly is.

I dont know. I think that her lack of... "formality" and structure is beautiful in itself.