Just Whistle (editted...again!!!!), critique/suggestions wanted |
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 Feb 25 2006, 10:03 PM
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I'm in the process of designing another site layout for myself, and so far, here is the snapshot of what I've come up with:
original image first version:(thumbed) [thumbw]http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/6134/cbgraphicpreview3du.jpg[/thumbw] I've editted it per your replies. Second Version...editted 1: [thumbw]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/7665/cbgraphicpreview3bf.jpg[/thumbw] Third (and final?) version... editted 2: [thumbw]http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/738/cbgraphicpreview1ow.jpg[/thumbw] I need to do some black/dark accenting work behind her, but the brushes I have just aren't working for the design. I use PSP7, so any help here would be greatly appreciated. Or do I need any accenting? Or do I need to add/subtract something from the design? I'm really welcoming critique! |
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Feb 26 2006, 05:33 PM
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 Yea Yea.  Group: Member Posts: 837 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 79,366 |
I don't like how she's so colourful and then the background is so bleh. Maybe make it a blue or pink, it might not look good like that either though. I like the font for Just Whistle.. the other font is okay. The brush behind her and behind the font doesn't match with the grids.
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Feb 27 2006, 06:36 PM
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QUOTE(ilauqh @ Feb 26 2006, 5:33 PM)  I don't like how she's so colourful and then the background is so bleh. Maybe make it a blue or pink, it might not look good like that either though. I like the font for Just Whistle.. the other font is okay. The brush behind her and behind the font doesn't match with the grids. i kind of agreeabout the grid brush not gonig well with the brush behind her. but other than that i really like it.i like the colors too. |
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digital.fragrance Just Whistle (editted...again!!!!) Feb 25 2006, 10:03 PM
skp86 Rachael!
I haven't seen you in so long... Feb 25 2006, 10:11 PM xbabyboo That toke me hecka long to load.
Lol.
I don`t ... Feb 26 2006, 05:29 PM ranniel Hiya rachel, I think its ok. Your not using photos... Feb 26 2006, 05:35 PM
digital.fragrance QUOTE(ranniel @ Feb 26 2006, 5:35 PM) Hiy... Feb 26 2006, 06:08 PM mizz_americaz yes, better use of color. the tan is boring compar... Feb 26 2006, 06:27 PM Zatanna Maybe that is what's bugging you - the contras... Feb 27 2006, 07:33 PM ecargnmyst hm..well maybe to balance with the colors of her..... Feb 27 2006, 07:40 PM islandgirl4eva I love your style, and I love the images you use. ... Feb 28 2006, 04:47 PM digital.fragrance Okay, check out version 2 - what do you think? I ... Feb 28 2006, 06:44 PM Zatanna Ooo, I like it much better. Well done. =) Feb 28 2006, 06:54 PM short_dark_hair I love love the 2nd one. The color is a lot better... Feb 28 2006, 07:33 PM skp86 oooo i the second one! Feb 28 2006, 07:48 PM ranniel the second one is the way to go. Feb 28 2006, 08:04 PM digital.fragrance alright, I've emerged with what I think will b... Feb 28 2006, 08:06 PM ranniel It's ok, I'm sure it'll be the bomb wh... Feb 28 2006, 08:07 PM islandgirl4eva I love what it's shaped up to be. You do some ... Mar 1 2006, 02:20 PM digital.fragrance QUOTE(islandgirl4eva @ Mar 1 2006, 2:20 P... Mar 1 2006, 02:53 PM ilauqh I like this version so much better than when I com... Mar 1 2006, 04:40 PM Maestro Version two looks even better! I like the brus... Mar 1 2006, 05:54 PM digital.fragrance thanks Just for you guys to know - it's Amano... Mar 1 2006, 06:46 PM |
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