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 Feb 26 2006, 01:55 PM
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you walked away when i needed you most
followed them as they all turned on me you said you'd be back, that it was all an act but i caught you with someone else and you never heard me cry that night deep inside as i was throwing you out you apologized but i wasnt listening the sorries were becoming endless you stood at my locked door and made it clear you wouldnt leave it tore me up the guilt i felt, you're loyalty to me but how could i love you anymore? you were never there for me and i found myself alone you were the only one i had but it wasnt true and you never heard me choke that night the gun went off and you began to cry if i were still there to hear you scream i'd change every motion of my mind im sorry, im so sorry.. ack. it's not all that good :] i usually make these things up as typing them. no wonder eh |
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Feb 26 2006, 09:21 PM
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 I just "got it like that". Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238 |
I thought that was very good.
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shes out and you never heard Feb 26 2006, 01:55 PM
shes out thank you :] Feb 27 2006, 01:18 AM Blow_Don't_SUCK I can see the story. I think it's pretty good.... Feb 27 2006, 06:57 PM
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