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 May 21 2004, 08:29 PM
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Hold me close and near Keep me away from the pain I fear Protect me now because I'm not as strong as I once was I fell through it all Watched me sink deeper and fall Capsized in my dreams Alone on my own as it seems From one second to the next I had it all and then nothing like the rest As I see death ahead I remember there you were - nothing said |
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May 21 2004, 08:32 PM
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:claps: another good one.. they should have a rating system on these.. so we can rate the poems, lol well.. if they did, i'd say 9.3/10
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Kathleen Fear May 21 2004, 08:29 PM
Kathleen Hehe you're too nice. This is back when I didn... May 21 2004, 08:39 PM EmeraldKnight haha I see.. who says you need lots of diff words ... May 21 2004, 08:43 PM Kathleen Hehe...well I just see mine as...plain, I suppose?... May 21 2004, 08:52 PM EmeraldKnight QUOTEHehe...well I just see mine as...plain, I sup... May 21 2004, 09:06 PM WhiteChocolate I like your writing style Kathleen, it's beaut... May 22 2004, 12:41 PM xtremeliquid Its pretty good. May 22 2004, 04:16 PM
NatiMarie It's really good Kathleen. =) Wow, you're ... May 23 2004, 01:42 PM |
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