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Just Whistle (editted...again!!!!), critique/suggestions wanted
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post Feb 25 2006, 10:03 PM
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I'm in the process of designing another site layout for myself, and so far, here is the snapshot of what I've come up with:

original image

first version:(thumbed)
[thumbw]http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/6134/cbgraphicpreview3du.jpg[/thumbw]

I've editted it per your replies.
Second Version...editted 1:
[thumbw]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/7665/cbgraphicpreview3bf.jpg[/thumbw]

Third (and final?) version... editted 2:
[thumbw]http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/738/cbgraphicpreview1ow.jpg[/thumbw]

I need to do some black/dark accenting work behind her, but the brushes I have just aren't working for the design. I use PSP7, so any help here would be greatly appreciated.

Or do I need any accenting? Or do I need to add/subtract something from the design? I'm really welcoming critique!
 
 
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turbulent
post Feb 26 2006, 06:27 PM
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yes, better use of color. the tan is boring compared to the artsyful picture haha i dunno, juss think of sum pictures or outlines or patterns/textures you could add. like maybe soft silhouettes of random birds in the corner of the text? idk lol
 

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digital.fragrance   Just Whistle (editted...again!!!!)   Feb 25 2006, 10:03 PM
skp86   Rachael! I haven't seen you in so long...   Feb 25 2006, 10:11 PM
xbabyboo   That toke me hecka long to load. Lol. I don`t ...   Feb 26 2006, 05:29 PM
ilauqh   I don't like how she's so colourful and th...   Feb 26 2006, 05:33 PM
Jeng   QUOTE(ilauqh @ Feb 26 2006, 5:33 PM) I do...   Feb 27 2006, 06:36 PM
ranniel   Hiya rachel, I think its ok. Your not using photos...   Feb 26 2006, 05:35 PM
digital.fragrance   QUOTE(ranniel @ Feb 26 2006, 5:35 PM) Hiy...   Feb 26 2006, 06:08 PM
mizz_americaz   yes, better use of color. the tan is boring compar...   Feb 26 2006, 06:27 PM
Zatanna   Maybe that is what's bugging you - the contras...   Feb 27 2006, 07:33 PM
ecargnmyst   hm..well maybe to balance with the colors of her.....   Feb 27 2006, 07:40 PM
islandgirl4eva   I love your style, and I love the images you use. ...   Feb 28 2006, 04:47 PM
digital.fragrance   Okay, check out version 2 - what do you think? I ...   Feb 28 2006, 06:44 PM
Zatanna   Ooo, I like it much better. Well done. =)   Feb 28 2006, 06:54 PM
short_dark_hair   I love love the 2nd one. The color is a lot better...   Feb 28 2006, 07:33 PM
skp86   oooo i the second one!   Feb 28 2006, 07:48 PM
ranniel   the second one is the way to go.   Feb 28 2006, 08:04 PM
digital.fragrance   alright, I've emerged with what I think will b...   Feb 28 2006, 08:06 PM
ranniel   It's ok, I'm sure it'll be the bomb wh...   Feb 28 2006, 08:07 PM
islandgirl4eva   I love what it's shaped up to be. You do some ...   Mar 1 2006, 02:20 PM
digital.fragrance   QUOTE(islandgirl4eva @ Mar 1 2006, 2:20 P...   Mar 1 2006, 02:53 PM
ilauqh   I like this version so much better than when I com...   Mar 1 2006, 04:40 PM
Maestro   Version two looks even better! I like the brus...   Mar 1 2006, 05:54 PM
digital.fragrance   thanks Just for you guys to know - it's Amano...   Mar 1 2006, 06:46 PM


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