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razbus
post Feb 16 2006, 01:14 AM
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I just "got it like that".
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a faint glare from far off
but not so far
a touch through the screen
straight to my heart
shot through rock hard
but how could this be?
a few hours never meant so much to me
exchanging stories without lies
i can breath...
take off my disguise and she didnt run
rare occurences to see
if only a mile were shorter
id touch her back
maybe we would fall in love
its not so far to fall
she said she'd catch me
one less thing to worry
but what now?
love sees no age...
will she see the hint?
maybe this will scare her off
if she reads it...
if she sees it...
but its too risky to not try once
maybe she'll see me for who i am.
 
 
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xxxSiERRAxxx
post Feb 26 2006, 12:21 AM
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"lal! laugh a little!"
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Oooh...it was weird, I kept on thinking at the end that it needed something, just one freaking little word to make it perfect...when I find it I'll get back to you...

--->Sierra

uggh...whats a word, that means you want to give something back? Like...like...like....AAAAAAAAAGGGGGH this is driving me absolutely NUTSO!! AAGGGGGGGGGGH!!

YES! YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YESSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! I GOT IT I GOT IT!!

Something like reply...I don't know...because you reply with computers, and when you reply, something has given something to you and you're going to give something back...
d*mmit I forgot the actual 3 words....grawr I will go slit my wrists...and right after I'll finally think of it, and pounce on the computer so I don't forget...


Ugh...More than a reply...that sounds more like a title to me...

d*mmit I can only think of titles
 

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razbus   untitled - 3   Feb 16 2006, 01:14 AM
iNyCxShoRT   I don't quite get this one like I get the othe...   Feb 25 2006, 01:12 AM
razbus   QUOTE(iNyCxShoRT @ Feb 25 2006, 1:12 AM) ...   Feb 25 2006, 03:43 AM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   QUOTE(razbus @ Feb 25 2006, 3:43 AM) Well...   Feb 25 2006, 03:47 AM
xxxSiERRAxxx   Oooh...it was weird, I kept on thinking at the end...   Feb 26 2006, 12:21 AM
ranniel   this is some good writing. it's very abstract ...   Mar 1 2006, 08:06 PM


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