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Not a very good poem,but well....
ana8
post May 18 2004, 12:13 PM
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Holding a knife in her hand

Thinking what to do next

To cut, to slice, to stab it

or simply to curve Her feelings

into Her heart

to never forget

how it is

when She's so lost

Alone

Unable to cry

Just lying there







No title there,it's not really good but still comments would be appreciated
 
 
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*Kathleen*
post May 21 2004, 06:17 PM
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Aww...I like it. _smile.gif
 

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ana8   Not a very good poem,but well....   May 18 2004, 12:13 PM
Kathleen   Aww...I like it.   May 21 2004, 06:17 PM


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