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[razbus]

a faint glare from far off
but not so far
a touch through the screen
straight to my heart
shot through rock hard
but how could this be?
a few hours never meant so much to me
exchanging stories without lies
i can breath...
take off my disguise and she didnt run
rare occurences to see
if only a mile were shorter
id touch her back
maybe we would fall in love
its not so far to fall
she said she'd catch me
one less thing to worry
but what now?
love sees no age...
will she see the hint?
maybe this will scare her off
if she reads it...
if she sees it...
but its too risky to not try once
maybe she'll see me for who i am.

[*iNyCxShoRT*]

I don't quite get this one like I get the others. I like the ending.

[razbus]

I don't quite get this one like I get the others. I like the ending.

Well, is about this girl that i met online. We talked forever, told secrets, stories, things that you could never tell someone face to face. We bonded. I started having feelings. But she lives so far away. I told her that I felt like I was constantly falling (cliche i know). And... she said that she would catch me. Now, with all of that in mind, re-read the poem. I think that it will make more sense now.

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

Well, is about this girl that i met online. We talked forever, told secrets, stories, things that you could never tell someone face to face. We bonded. I started having feelings. But she lives so far away. I told her that I felt like I was constantly falling (cliche i know). And... she said that she would catch me. Now, with all of that in mind, re-read the poem. I think that it will make more sense now.

I see.

The first few lines lost the story. It sounded like you were desperately trying to sound profound.