The Trees Epochal, Do I like trees or what? Options

[Anielka]

Hurrying towards the odious glen,
The red grass bloodying the midnight fog,
Seeking solace from the moon who glows like the garb of he who is forever chasing,
forever lurking in the shadows of the wood.
Hiding in the wake of a monolith
that smells of brackish and feels like carrion,
You peer out at your pursuer,
Who lies dead in the bracken
at the edge of the trees.
Without him you are blissfully alone, hatefully alone,
Truly alone
Moon or no moon--
And even the grass,
who has seen enough bloodshed to be a sea,
ceases to whisper.

I wrote this about a year ago as well as my other poem, Tree Spirit.
What you think? I know line 3 is long.

[Anielka]

Really? Wow, thanks a lot. No, I've never even lived near the woods. But I have a very vivid imagination. In fact, this poem sprouted from a daydream I was having. *sighs* It will bring me to the looney bin one day, of that I am certain.