Personal Composition Essay Help, People good at writing intros/thesis statements needed! |
Personal Composition Essay Help, People good at writing intros/thesis statements needed! |
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Feb 19 2006, 11:12 PM
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Anyways, I hate English. We're working on personal composition essays right now and I cannot write essays. Our teacher gave us two ridiculous topics which are like our final exam topics he said and we have to write an intro paragraph & one body paragraph for each.
Who's good at English and wants to help me write my intro? Cause I can deal with body paragraphs. The topics are: Memories influence our lives. and Certain experiences can mark the beginnings of maturity. Who's good at writing thesis statements? Help! Help? Please? |
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Feb 20 2006, 06:38 PM
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Experiences that mark the beginning of maturity offer a peek beyond the veil of childhood restriction into the freedoms of the adult world. For many, turning 18, voting, registering for the draft and getting a driver's license are rites of passage that mark the onset of adulthood and the end of curfews and adult supervision. For me, an unassuming note that Christine Johnson passed to me in 3rd grade thrust me into the world of dating and my first lesson in maturity.
This is one one that I would use. It is an intro to the 2 week relationship I had with my first "girlfriend" and kiss. |
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stephinika Personal Composition Essay Help Feb 19 2006, 11:12 PM
silver rain Hmm, maybe, find an example? And use that as your ... Feb 20 2006, 12:55 AM
stephinika Very nice, thanks for the help. It's due now s... Feb 22 2006, 11:06 PM![]() ![]() |