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*Statistik*
post Feb 13 2006, 08:45 PM
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The clouds awakening, winds moving at a high rate//
As god, I believe when nobody else does at the same fate//
I'm on the microphone trying to bring the special effect//
With the power on, it's time to spit, my vocals connect//
Don't get me wrong on this, cuz I do this purely right//
From ages to ages, I became maturely tight//
One day I asked myself if I can accomplish something//
I looked up to the sky and just noticed "One Thing" (1 thing)//
Years later, I walk on the street and see things in a different part//
Had some money in my pocket, bought some bread in the mart//
Hearing guns shooting, sighting the drug dealers hustling//
I felt like I was in a drowning surrounding, that made me feel busting//
Waking up, I can see the birds chirping sitting on the beautiful trees//
I was restless, but man?? It's not like I was deceased//
Couldn't hold my breath for a minute or two//
No emergency dudes, but it felt like my life was over, is it true?//
Jumping ahead of the line was the wrong step to make//
All the recycled memories couldn't be restored for sake//
It feels like the world is beautiful, but all of us be ugly//
And the ugliest people consider the world to be pretty//

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*Statistik*
post Feb 16 2006, 03:55 PM
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you know what??

f**k all you guys giving me bullshit feedback..read the member's guideline for once y'all..stupid ass clowns
 
Shahin
post Feb 16 2006, 11:30 PM
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QUOTE(Statistik @ Feb 16 2006, 12:55 PM)
you know what??

f**k all you guys giving me bullshit feedback..read the member's guideline for once y'all..stupid ass clowns
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Lol.


Oh yeah, your getting better, but a lot of your lines don't make much sense. It seems like you know this, and you try to make something out of nothing sometimes.
 

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Statistik   untitled flow - statistik   Feb 13 2006, 08:45 PM
lil_chubby_cheeks2   QUOTEAll the recycled memories couldn't be res...   Feb 13 2006, 08:47 PM
BrandonSaunders   Stop rapping. Try spoken word.   Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM
Statistik   QUOTE(BrandonSaunders @ Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM...   Feb 14 2006, 03:53 PM
razbus   QUOTE(BrandonSaunders @ Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM...   Feb 16 2006, 01:20 AM
Shahin   QUOTE(razbus @ Feb 15 2006, 10:20 PM)Oh, and ...   Feb 16 2006, 01:25 AM
razbus   QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:25 AM)Because t...   Feb 16 2006, 01:27 AM
yo pusha   maybe english isnt your thing..   Feb 14 2006, 12:02 AM
razbus   That wasn't a rap?? Lol. It should be dude. Th...   Feb 16 2006, 01:19 AM
Shahin   ^Haha, your a funny person.   Feb 16 2006, 01:29 AM
Retrogressive   QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:29 AM)^Haha, yo...   Feb 16 2006, 01:36 AM
razbus   QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 16 2006, 1:36 AM)Re...   Feb 16 2006, 01:42 AM
Retrogressive   QUOTE(razbus @ Feb 16 2006, 1:42 AM)elders?...   Feb 16 2006, 01:45 AM
yo pusha   QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 15 2006, 10:45 PM)s...   Feb 16 2006, 01:52 AM
Retrogressive   QUOTE(yo pusha @ Feb 16 2006, 1:52 AM) f...   Feb 16 2006, 01:53 AM
Shahin   QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 15 2006, 10:36 PM)R...   Feb 16 2006, 01:43 AM
Shahin   ^ Please re-read this whole thread. I told him why...   Feb 16 2006, 01:48 AM
razbus   QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:48 AM)... becau...   Feb 16 2006, 01:55 AM
Retrogressive   No, you were insulting. There is a difference betw...   Feb 16 2006, 01:52 AM
Shahin   ^ Fixed. I figured, seeing as how he wasn't l...   Feb 16 2006, 02:05 AM
wind&fire   oh please people hush... be constructive... Jason...   Feb 16 2006, 06:36 AM
Statistik   you know what?? f**k all you guys giving me bulls...   Feb 16 2006, 03:55 PM
razbus   QUOTE(Statistik @ Feb 16 2006, 3:55 PM)you kn...   Feb 16 2006, 07:18 PM
Shahin   QUOTE(Statistik @ Feb 16 2006, 12:55 PM)you k...   Feb 16 2006, 11:30 PM
Statistik   ^stfu and stop being sarcastic ..   Feb 16 2006, 08:55 PM
DaTru KataLYST   Everyone needs to calm down now. Thanks.   Feb 16 2006, 11:38 PM
wind&fire   i agree with brandon... youll do better with spoke...   Feb 17 2006, 07:34 AM


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