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| *Statistik* |
 Feb 13 2006, 08:45 PM
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The clouds awakening, winds moving at a high rate//
As god, I believe when nobody else does at the same fate// I'm on the microphone trying to bring the special effect// With the power on, it's time to spit, my vocals connect// Don't get me wrong on this, cuz I do this purely right// From ages to ages, I became maturely tight// One day I asked myself if I can accomplish something// I looked up to the sky and just noticed "One Thing" (1 thing)// Years later, I walk on the street and see things in a different part// Had some money in my pocket, bought some bread in the mart// Hearing guns shooting, sighting the drug dealers hustling// I felt like I was in a drowning surrounding, that made me feel busting// Waking up, I can see the birds chirping sitting on the beautiful trees// I was restless, but man?? It's not like I was deceased// Couldn't hold my breath for a minute or two// No emergency dudes, but it felt like my life was over, is it true?// Jumping ahead of the line was the wrong step to make// All the recycled memories couldn't be restored for sake// It feels like the world is beautiful, but all of us be ugly// And the ugliest people consider the world to be pretty//  uppin for feedbackzz... |
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Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM
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Stop rapping. Try spoken word.
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Feb 14 2006, 03:53 PM
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QUOTE(BrandonSaunders @ Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM) Stop rapping. Try spoken word.  Umm..that wasn't really a rap? 
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Statistik untitled flow - statistik Feb 13 2006, 08:45 PM
lil_chubby_cheeks2 QUOTEAll the recycled memories couldn't be res... Feb 13 2006, 08:47 PM
razbus QUOTE(BrandonSaunders @ Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM... Feb 16 2006, 01:20 AM Shahin QUOTE(razbus @ Feb 15 2006, 10:20 PM)Oh, and ... Feb 16 2006, 01:25 AM razbus QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:25 AM)Because t... Feb 16 2006, 01:27 AM yo pusha maybe english isnt your thing.. Feb 14 2006, 12:02 AM razbus That wasn't a rap?? Lol. It should be dude. Th... Feb 16 2006, 01:19 AM Shahin ^Haha, your a funny person. Feb 16 2006, 01:29 AM Retrogressive QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:29 AM)^Haha, yo... Feb 16 2006, 01:36 AM razbus QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 16 2006, 1:36 AM)Re... Feb 16 2006, 01:42 AM Retrogressive QUOTE(razbus @ Feb 16 2006, 1:42 AM)elders?... Feb 16 2006, 01:45 AM yo pusha QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 15 2006, 10:45 PM)s... Feb 16 2006, 01:52 AM Retrogressive QUOTE(yo pusha @ Feb 16 2006, 1:52 AM)
f... Feb 16 2006, 01:53 AM Shahin QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 15 2006, 10:36 PM)R... Feb 16 2006, 01:43 AM Shahin ^ Please re-read this whole thread. I told him why... Feb 16 2006, 01:48 AM razbus QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:48 AM)... becau... Feb 16 2006, 01:55 AM Retrogressive No, you were insulting. There is a difference betw... Feb 16 2006, 01:52 AM Shahin ^ Fixed.
I figured, seeing as how he wasn't l... Feb 16 2006, 02:05 AM wind&fire oh please people hush... be constructive...
Jason... Feb 16 2006, 06:36 AM Statistik you know what??
f**k all you guys giving me bulls... Feb 16 2006, 03:55 PM razbus QUOTE(Statistik @ Feb 16 2006, 3:55 PM)you kn... Feb 16 2006, 07:18 PM Shahin QUOTE(Statistik @ Feb 16 2006, 12:55 PM)you k... Feb 16 2006, 11:30 PM Statistik ^stfu and stop being sarcastic .. Feb 16 2006, 08:55 PM DaTru KataLYST Everyone needs to calm down now. Thanks. Feb 16 2006, 11:38 PM wind&fire i agree with brandon... youll do better with spoke... Feb 17 2006, 07:34 AM |
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