Fact not Fiction, death cab for cutie layout Options

[Gypsy Eyes]

Ok so it's my first layout in a realllly reeaaallly long time. Cut me a little slack. It's nothing great, i'll probably just use it as a temp. I'm not sure if i like it yet. Comments and constructive critism are always welcome.

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[ecargnmyst]

i like it very much..except it does look like its missing something..maybe add something dark to the lower right area right above the bird and below the paint splashes..perhaps like..3 birds flying to that one bird..just feels like there should be a brush there thats the same shade/color as the bird brush..to kind of..finish it