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I'M EMO
*Blow_Don't_SUCK*
post Feb 4 2006, 12:19 PM
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Let's all write poetry that makes us emo!

hehe I won't start yet...my ideas aren't coming.
 
 
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post Feb 4 2006, 03:31 PM
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I hate this world
*finds a razor*
*slit*
EVERYONE HATES ME
I'M ALL ALONE IN THIS DARK ABYSS
SUFFOCATED INTO A MEANINGLESS EXISTENCE
 
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post Feb 5 2006, 07:40 PM
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QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Feb 4 2006, 3:31 PM)
I hate this world
*finds a razor*
*slit*
EVERYONE HATES ME
I'M ALL ALONE IN THIS DARK ABYSS
SUFFOCATED INTO A MEANINGLESS EXISTENCE
*


crap..if that is emo...then... cry.gif


Writhing in the darkened spaces of my mind
fallen prey to the chasm of chaos
Troubled demons consume the life
exhausting the spirit; the only light
expiring the words; Let all cries fade
Lost in the vastness and stripped of the energy
I recover only to be drained once more
Withering dreams escape my grasp
strands of hope die unclaimed
but a trace of dream left behind
Sought my sanctuary in that little thing
gave up my soul for that fragment of hope
Be the wind to carry me through
for Fear has trapped me in Time's frozen hands
Let the pain out; a burst of sound
The windows shatter and slice through my thoughts
slashing its way to the numb core of myself
A surge of feeling; an explosion of emotions
And the dark void that bound me all this time
dissolved before my very eyes

crap..i just realized most of my poems are emo..heyy..but theres a happy endingg in the end!!...heheh..and thats only the abridged version..O.o...
 

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Blow_Don't_SUCK   I'M EMO   Feb 4 2006, 12:19 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   ^it's kinda liek the other dude's rapping ...   Feb 4 2006, 12:24 PM
Smoogrish   Hahah this reminds me of that one song on FFR (Fla...   Feb 4 2006, 01:51 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   I hate this world *finds a razor* *slit* EVERYONE ...   Feb 4 2006, 03:31 PM
ecargnmyst   QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Feb 4 2006, 3:31 ...   Feb 5 2006, 07:40 PM
[pshaa]shauna   Im being squeezed// sucking the life out of me// t...   Feb 4 2006, 03:34 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   I find myself locking all the doors In this wretch...   Feb 4 2006, 03:38 PM
ikn0wurm0m   I hate this game I hate the world I hate my ex I h...   Feb 4 2006, 03:46 PM
[pshaa]shauna   Many ingredients make up what is called the human ...   Feb 4 2006, 03:53 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   ^I can see you like this thread Dance into a sad...   Feb 4 2006, 04:06 PM
tweeak   She makes me ill Stabbed stabbed stabbed stabbed ...   Feb 4 2006, 04:29 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   QUOTE(tweeak @ Feb 4 2006, 5:29 PM)She makes ...   Feb 4 2006, 04:33 PM
tweeak   We were friends at one point. Her old xanga was po...   Feb 4 2006, 04:38 PM
Programmer   comprehending all this has made me depressed   Feb 4 2006, 06:30 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   I drown in my ignorance Beseeching an answer never...   Feb 4 2006, 06:44 PM
salcha   You guys are so good at being depressed   Feb 4 2006, 07:20 PM
nightmare4taki   OMg, Im drowning in sorrow// Looking for a tear to...   Feb 4 2006, 07:38 PM
[pshaa]shauna   Oh woe is me! My heart bleeds! Oh I must d...   Feb 4 2006, 08:19 PM
Smoogrish   Oh, she likes bacon, but no bacon would ever like ...   Feb 4 2006, 10:22 PM
[pshaa]shauna   ^ ha. (you people know you can be serious too rig...   Feb 4 2006, 10:26 PM
nightmare4taki   Stepped up in the place everyone was drowned in sa...   Feb 4 2006, 11:43 PM
yo pusha   im depressed hes depressed shes depressed cause we...   Feb 4 2006, 11:46 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   Bring forth the grievous past that binds us My tea...   Feb 4 2006, 11:54 PM
nightmare4taki   *plays the piano* I met this girl, she was lookin...   Feb 5 2006, 12:27 AM
[pshaa]shauna   I'm so sick of all this shit all the time no m...   Feb 5 2006, 01:21 AM
sadolakced acid   letting my life flow through my fingers i let it f...   Feb 5 2006, 01:29 AM
oX_Muh_Nirvana_Xo   Losing grip fading away, Hoping there will be a be...   Feb 5 2006, 01:36 AM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   I had only but one desire To entangle you into my ...   Feb 5 2006, 11:49 AM
nightmare4taki   I had the desire and passion but quickly got lost/...   Feb 5 2006, 07:44 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   Suffocate me into your frigid hands Leave me in yo...   Feb 5 2006, 07:53 PM
yo pusha   the most beautiful thing ever And it's here to...   Feb 5 2006, 08:03 PM
[pshaa]shauna   Every night I toss and turn Wishing you were by my...   Feb 5 2006, 08:06 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   I cower in fear when I you bask in your unsettling...   Feb 5 2006, 08:32 PM
[pshaa]shauna   I sit here waiting For what I don't know Just ...   Feb 5 2006, 08:37 PM
tweeak   The anger The pent up anger The tedium Ho hum Mard...   Feb 5 2006, 08:47 PM
nightmare4taki   Heart Pacing// Heart racing// Victory Tasting// Vi...   Feb 6 2006, 09:22 PM
chaneun   this life has no.. soul for me?   Feb 6 2006, 10:24 PM
ecargnmyst   her fists clenched mouth wide open but no sound co...   Feb 6 2006, 10:52 PM


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