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 Feb 2 2006, 08:07 PM
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 i am mean. fear me.  Group: Member Posts: 178 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 300,587  |
this is my first vector. it's not great but i thought i would post it anyway.
   constructive critisism, please. i've dcided not to finish it.  maybe you guys can point somethings out that i can do better next time
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Feb 3 2006, 06:23 PM
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Pretty choppy =\
The eyelashes are gross...they're too fat. The eyebrows could use some hair The nose I have to say is very good Same with the teeth. But you should work on the lips too And the skin is ok. |
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ohnotheydidnt progressional vector Feb 2 2006, 08:07 PM
o0olaalaa its too choppy >< try and make it smoother Feb 2 2006, 08:22 PM fishcake-y Smoother would be nicer. &try not to blur, as ... Feb 2 2006, 08:24 PM xbabyboo It`s good for a first! Feb 2 2006, 08:24 PM Madame C It's Sarah Michelle Gellar. Your shapes are q... Feb 2 2006, 08:26 PM StanleyThePanda First of all, the layers are too choppy. Secondly,... Feb 2 2006, 11:28 PM peggysturr Don't blur it out of some parts are choppy. Ev... Feb 2 2006, 11:48 PM Jeng i agree with them about it being choppy, other wis... Feb 3 2006, 02:57 PM
mizz_americaz yeah instead of blurring juss add more layers ;) ... Feb 4 2006, 02:40 PM |
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