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*Blow_Don't_SUCK*
post Feb 1 2006, 12:47 AM
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Paint me a sky of red
Where the sun sleeps under the light of day
Color me a picture of blue
where the water entwines into a frozen mirror of fray
Write me a perfect sonnet, where the crows rest
Above the silver trees, shining starless in a moon-lit glow
Your ink darkens into a black path
Unknowing silhouettes dance upon the streets of darkness

Remember the jeweled sky draped as a blanket of the world
Where you brush upon a lonely meadow
Where the flowers bloom in the coldest of the seasons
And wither upon the sunniest of the days

Each frame stands upon a melancholic definition
An unfinished artwork held by a painter
Whose lifestory told through many colors
Mixing into one path of an apathetic drawing
Where your eyes look upon a frigid motionless scene
An illusion never before seen

He calls it an untitled artwork
Never named therefore never completed
because his life runs through a war of colors
A neverending story of his years
Where a colorless dancer poses for him lifeless
As for his hands that bring to life a motionless scene
An illusion never before scene
 
 
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*Blow_Don't_SUCK*
post Feb 1 2006, 12:57 AM
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^Why thank you very much. I really appreciate your compliment. This is the third poem I wrote and I'm glad that everyone seems to be amused by my work. Thank you very much.
 
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post Feb 1 2006, 01:03 AM
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QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Feb 1 2006, 1:57 AM)
^Why thank you very much. I really appreciate your compliment. This is the third poem I wrote and I'm glad that everyone seems to be amused by my work. Thank you very much.
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Amused?
Hell no.

Try enamored, engrossed and thoroughly engaged in rapturous bliss!
This is absolutely marvelous.

Are you serious?
Is this really the third poem you've ever written?
 

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Blow_Don't_SUCK   Untitled Artwork   Feb 1 2006, 12:47 AM
illumineering   Another brilliant writer emerges from cb! I...   Feb 1 2006, 12:54 AM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   ^Why thank you very much. I really appreciate your...   Feb 1 2006, 12:57 AM
illumineering   QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Feb 1 2006, 1:57 ...   Feb 1 2006, 01:03 AM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   ^Oh yes my third poem. And please, do not flatter ...   Feb 1 2006, 01:19 AM
illumineering   QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Feb 1 2006, 2:19 ...   Feb 1 2006, 01:31 AM
RiddleMeWonders   You really should continue to write. You're ...   Feb 2 2006, 09:26 AM
Acid Bath Slayer   Yeah. I actually like that alot. Wonderful flow, g...   Feb 25 2006, 01:52 AM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   ^aw thanks *starts being nicer*   Feb 25 2006, 01:53 AM
ranniel   Wow, this gives me ideas. Good ideas, great awesom...   Mar 1 2006, 08:10 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   ^thanks ^_^   Mar 1 2006, 09:33 PM
Arjuna Capulong   Wow. Very impressive Yen. Yes, you should contin...   May 29 2006, 04:58 PM


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