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Feb 1 2006, 12:47 AM
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Paint me a sky of red
Where the sun sleeps under the light of day Color me a picture of blue where the water entwines into a frozen mirror of fray Write me a perfect sonnet, where the crows rest Above the silver trees, shining starless in a moon-lit glow Your ink darkens into a black path Unknowing silhouettes dance upon the streets of darkness Remember the jeweled sky draped as a blanket of the world Where you brush upon a lonely meadow Where the flowers bloom in the coldest of the seasons And wither upon the sunniest of the days Each frame stands upon a melancholic definition An unfinished artwork held by a painter Whose lifestory told through many colors Mixing into one path of an apathetic drawing Where your eyes look upon a frigid motionless scene An illusion never before seen He calls it an untitled artwork Never named therefore never completed because his life runs through a war of colors A neverending story of his years Where a colorless dancer poses for him lifeless As for his hands that bring to life a motionless scene An illusion never before scene |
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Feb 1 2006, 12:57 AM
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^Why thank you very much. I really appreciate your compliment. This is the third poem I wrote and I'm glad that everyone seems to be amused by my work. Thank you very much.
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Feb 1 2006, 01:03 AM
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QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Feb 1 2006, 1:57 AM) ^Why thank you very much. I really appreciate your compliment. This is the third poem I wrote and I'm glad that everyone seems to be amused by my work. Thank you very much. Amused? Hell no. Try enamored, engrossed and thoroughly engaged in rapturous bliss! This is absolutely marvelous. Are you serious? Is this really the third poem you've ever written? |
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Blow_Don't_SUCK Untitled Artwork Feb 1 2006, 12:47 AM
illumineering Another brilliant writer emerges from cb! I... Feb 1 2006, 12:54 AM
Blow_Don't_SUCK ^Oh yes my third poem. And please, do not flatter ... Feb 1 2006, 01:19 AM
illumineering QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Feb 1 2006, 2:19 ... Feb 1 2006, 01:31 AM
RiddleMeWonders You really should continue to write.
You're ... Feb 2 2006, 09:26 AM
Acid Bath Slayer Yeah. I actually like that alot.
Wonderful flow, g... Feb 25 2006, 01:52 AM
Blow_Don't_SUCK ^aw thanks *starts being nicer* Feb 25 2006, 01:53 AM
ranniel Wow, this gives me ideas. Good ideas, great awesom... Mar 1 2006, 08:10 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK ^thanks ^_^ Mar 1 2006, 09:33 PM
Arjuna Capulong Wow. Very impressive Yen.
Yes, you should contin... May 29 2006, 04:58 PM![]() ![]() |