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 Jan 27 2006, 09:13 PM
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So I have pretty much the worst computer ever. I probably have 100s of viruses but anyways.
I started to make my first vector, but i made it too orange. So after 5 hours i restarted and made this one. Unfortunetly when i was saving it my computer crashed and it i didn't save so i was pretty mad. I did a print screen Check it outt and plz criticize and drop me some feedback :) thanks  Original: 
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Jan 27 2006, 09:32 PM
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Please allow me to critisize
-the hands blend in w/ the face... -The shirt is prettygood it has nice shading. -The hair is pretty good but it could use some strands -The eyes are kind of freaky and undetailed. -it hardly looks like the nose is there except for a bit of shading -The lips need texture- you know what I mean? this tutorial should help you: http://www.deviantart.com/view/22403733/ -The eyeborws are kind of a blob.... I know I sound like a critic to the extreme....so if you don't want to listen it's fine. Btw you are very pretty 
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Jan 28 2006, 03:49 PM
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QUOTE(skp86 @ Jan 27 2006, 6:32 PM) Please allow me to critisize -the hands blend in w/ the face... -The shirt is prettygood it has nice shading. -The hair is pretty good but it could use some strands -The eyes are kind of freaky and undetailed. -it hardly looks like the nose is there except for a bit of shading -The lips need texture- you know what I mean? this tutorial should help you: http://www.deviantart.com/view/22403733/ -The eyeborws are kind of a blob.... I know I sound like a critic to the extreme....so if you don't want to listen it's fine. Btw you are very pretty  yeah i agree... the mouth is too wide and the teeth dont fit into the mouth perfectly. theres a huge gap on the sides..and uhm the nose is sorta blobish looking  but gj overall |
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CALiFORNiAxBEBE my first vector Jan 27 2006, 09:13 PM
CALiFORNiAxBEBE skp86 you were great help actually. i'm going ... Jan 27 2006, 10:24 PM Stephire First?
I think that is VERY well done for a first.... Jan 28 2006, 03:52 AM skp86 QUOTE(CALiFORNiAxBEBE @ Jan 27 2006, 11:24 PM... Jan 28 2006, 02:18 PM Jeng pretty good with the first, i agree with steph,add... Jan 28 2006, 03:45 PM mizz_americaz lol vectoring is hard, isnt it? yours is pretty im... Jan 28 2006, 07:16 PM Jasminluvsu i think this is great because i know i cant do any... Jan 29 2006, 06:18 PM xbabyboo It`s nice. Jan 30 2006, 07:10 PM
CALiFORNiAxBEBE Yey. you guys are tooo nice! Jan 31 2006, 01:16 AM |
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