eh... my first FULL vexel, idk... Options

[add1cted2f1re]

my 1st thing ever was some crappy hair
my 2nd thing was a Napolean Dynamite vexel that every1 hated

so now i present:
PLEASE LEAVE ME COMMENTS WITH CRITICISM! IF THERE IS SOMETHING ABOUT IT YOU DO NOT LIKE, TELL ME!

i dont think i've ever seen an animal vexeled before... :/


Well, here goes the progress report:

After 3 Hours:

*the white part around his eyes are choppy b/c i dont care about it b/c it will be covered with feathers anyway*

After 3 Hours:


*i started the head and u can see how i went over the white part of the eye, and it is no longer "choppy"*

After 5.5 Hours:


*i added more parts to the eye; added more detail to head and beak; and almost finished the head by getting the area under the eye*

After 6 Hours:


*not much added however i did add more detail to the head and SOME of the body, i hate the color...*

ORIGINAL:
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This post has been edited by add1cted2f1re: Jan 26 2006, 11:04 PM

[turbulent]

thats really original, and brave hahah your right, nobody does vexel birds much around here. it looks like your spending a lot of time on this which is good because it really shows in your work

only critism is to not to go into too much unessesary detail [lol that sounds wierd] but what i mean is dont follow the posterized lines tooo much beacause it kind of gives off this choppy feel. lol its weird to explain like the beak i personally feel should be really smooth but all the shapes of the layers are very curvy and yeahhh. ...dont take this too harshly beacause its not meant that way, its seriously a truly great vexel... sry if i didnt explain it cleary =(