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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
as constant as river,
which isnt at all constant and as tall as a mountain which has fallen. you know that when we consider our past, it isnt what we see. or, really, what we feel. its what we learnt and if what we learnt was that sometimes we dont want to know then would we be blissful? ignorant, sure... or have we reached the depths of knowledge? well, as far as im concerned that depth is on top of a tall, tall mountain which has fallen, and been rebuilt |
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Jan 26 2006, 05:26 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
I disagree with that first comment. It's definitely not "okay"
Your poetry takes a stand and gives an opinion. It's brilliant James. |
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racoons > you ........ Jan 25 2006, 04:05 PM
Ilaem yay
it's okay
good, good job Jan 25 2006, 10:26 PM stephinika hmm, nice. i like it, as usual james. i like the ... Jan 26 2006, 12:57 AM torngemini it's very very good! Jan 26 2006, 01:50 PM lilliannnn ^Brilliant, I agree.
I read it aloud and I like t... Jan 26 2006, 07:09 PM illumineering You have the voice of a wise old sage who speaks o... Jan 26 2006, 09:46 PM
racoons > you thank you all very much for your comments
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