Emergency, in case of. Options

[RiddleMeWonders]

In case of an emergency run as far and as fast as you can.
Dont look back or we'll be as salt before we turn our heads.
Cling tightly to the one you're running with.
In case of an emergency...
Don't fall back, keep up with me.
Clear the station on it's situation needs
For causes bleed and mingling feeds
They will want to become us.
And catch the runners as they pass..
Ask for silence and when it does not last
FIND the breaker and sound it loud
that those who betray us will be cast out and thrown down
And as breath takes body in cool morning calm
a moment of coming to clarity balms
what catches poison and blistering song
and taking the tomb tree away from the wronged
So silence leave quickly and comes as before
when peace was our mother and life was at our door
Sheltered and cared for
Nurished and fed
Now emergency takes us on a run with the dead
Choosing our paths leading parasites, behind..
no traces of cancer, no confusion of mind.
With a blur of dysfunction..... and a smile so dear
quiet memory seeps into the spin and makes everything clear.

[RiddleMeWonders]

I really dont know how to respond to that.

Thanks. :)

[illumineering]

I really dont know how to respond to that.

Thanks. :)

I've got no expectations of a response. I am absolutely amazed by the voice you are developing through your writing. I'm glad you've chosen to share so much of your work here. Yes, I believe you are capable of writing a Pulitzer worthy piece. Anyone can learn the rules of language. Your view of the world, expressed through writing, is a wonderful gift that represents the "art" of writing.

[KissMe2408]

I've got no expectations of a response.  I am absolutely amazed by the voice you are developing through your writing.  I'm glad you've chosen to share so much of your work here.  Yes, I believe you are capable of writing a Pulitzer worthy piece.  Anyone can learn the rules of language.  Your view of the world, expressed through writing, is a wonderful gift that represents the "art" of writing.

^I agree. You've always been a favorite of mine. I love reading your work.
And i'm not talking about just on CB. I"m talking about out of everyone i've met and been shown their work.

I can't even explain my reaction to this piece.
I think this is one of your best.

I'll just say that if somehow I could print out this poem, go the nearest movie theatre, steal the mic, and announce this poem on the loud speaker before the movie started, then everything would be good :)

lol if that makes sense in any way. It's a compliment lol