I will.., bad poety Options

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I will stab you till you bleed.
I will make your eyes cry blood.
I will cut your throat.
I will sew your lips together, watching you scream painfully.
I will stab at your voicebox, searing pain through your veins.
I will take a hook and gouge your blood-filled eyes.
I will chop off your fingers, one by one, tearing each limb, ligament, and saw through every bone.

I will make it so that you will remember my name.
But.. i will not kill you.

Instead..
I will watch you suffer through each passing day.
I will not allow you to apologize on your last gaping breathe for bleeding on my shirt.
I will sear your flesh with kerosene and enflame it with the matches in my pocket.

But i will not kill you.

I will take chains from the depths of my drawers -- The ones ive kept esp. for you
I will endear your pain, with laughter.
I will ignore your agonizing screams with a flame striking the matchbox.
I will make you pay for all the pain youve caused me.

But will not kill you.

Instead..
I will watch you kill yourself without me ever laying a hand on you.

[*Azarel*]

I think the second "I will not kill you," can be omitted. There are a few grammatical issues littered throughout the piece, but I like the concept. Perhaps you could deviate from "I will" in every line; I think it would make the piece more interesting, although I do really like some lines of this.