some poems i wrote, need a second opinion Options

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this is perfect
i wrote a poem but i feel like its missin sumthin so maybe you guys can help me out

What do I get when I’m crying all night long
When I am reminded by every love song
My love for you was true
And that you even knew
So why did u leave me
Why did u go
I thought I could trust you
But that was a no
There will always be an emptiness in my heart
Telling me we shouldn’t be apart

and then i wrote this one too but i dont no

I lay awake thinking of you all night
But you and me baby we just ain’t right
You’re all I think about all day long
So tell me why are we so wrong
You have too many doubts you say
But you and me baby we will be okay