Release, a poem |
Release, a poem |
*digital.fragrance* |
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Release
Lost, in a world - of Passions, Locked Away. So deep my soul cannot display. Torn, with desires - for Beauty, There construed. There - the heart is openly nude. Naked, with no masks - with Beatings, Now exposed. Embarassed at the conflict showed. Confused, with choices - in Mazes, So enshrined. Enclosed with no hope to survive. Distant, hope had seemed - from Far Lands, And a light. The Deliverer within sight. Found, in a world - of Passion, Now set free. My soul takes flight inside of me! |
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![]() Yawn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 ![]() |
This absoloutly took my breath away.
Usually i pick a passage which is my favorite in someone's poem, but i loved the whole thing from beginning to end. You've got talent and have a unique way of writing. please post more! |
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