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RiddleMeWonders
post Jan 3 2006, 11:52 AM
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fell in love with a boy
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I can hear the old birds sing
Like rejoice in something so simple as water
A dripping flowing movement of sound
I can smell the trees
Cedar and pine, bleeding and mending
Scarring with the vines
I can feel the sun filter down
through the canopy and warm selected areas of my body
My face, my fingers, my knees...
I can see the day beginning
A slow walk of the sun I cannot see
across that great expanse of sky
The cold warmth of the damp ground beneath me as I lay
A creature of the forest
Safe and away from City's play
 
 
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KissMe2408
post Jan 10 2006, 02:22 AM
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Yawn
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Beautiful, absoloutly beautiful.

You barely post your stuff anymore. I've missed it!
You are one of my fav writers on CB
and inspire me all the time
Keep it up! keep posting!

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Cedar and pine, bleeding and mending
Scarring with the vines


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The cold warmth of the damp ground beneath me as I lay
A creature of the forest
Safe and away from City's play


amazing
 

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