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Haiku, post them up!
*NatiMarie*
post May 17 2004, 06:03 PM
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Post up some of your haikus so that everyone can see them. They can be about whatever you want (keep them clean please, PG-13).

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Just in case you don't know what a Haiku is, it's common format consist of a poem that has 5 syllables in first line, 7 syllables the second, and 5 syllables the third. Here's an example one that I wrote a couple of months ago (it's longer, well it's not a Haiku, just a combination of three.):

Breaking Loose
by NatiMarie

Trembling silence
Fear of breaking the tether
My inwardness lives

Botheration kills
Cringing while venerating
Sluing in my pit

Binging fearfulness
Terminating hope, now gone
Accruing demise
 
 
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EmeraldKnight
post May 17 2004, 10:26 PM
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First one:

Why can't you see
The painful tears in my eyes
As you walked away

Second one:
We live together
On this silly little world
That some called the earth

lol the first reflected my feelings not so long ago, and the second was just pure randomness, or as I like to call it, randomosity ^___^
 

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