Haiku, post them up! |
| *NatiMarie* |
 May 17 2004, 06:03 PM
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Post up some of your haikus so that everyone can see them. They can be about whatever you want (keep them clean please, PG-13).
 Just in case you don't know what a Haiku is, it's common format consist of a poem that has 5 syllables in first line, 7 syllables the second, and 5 syllables the third. Here's an example one that I wrote a couple of months ago (it's longer, well it's not a Haiku, just a combination of three.): Breaking Loose by NatiMarie Trembling silence Fear of breaking the tether My inwardness lives Botheration kills Cringing while venerating Sluing in my pit Binging fearfulness Terminating hope, now gone Accruing demise |
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May 17 2004, 10:26 PM
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First one:
Why can't you see The painful tears in my eyes As you walked away Second one: We live together On this silly little world That some called the earth lol the first reflected my feelings not so long ago, and the second was just pure randomness, or as I like to call it, randomosity ^___^ |
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NatiMarie Haiku May 17 2004, 06:03 PM
CEP ^ Yeah, I wrote a poem like that expecting it was ... May 17 2004, 06:56 PM Kathleen I like, Jose. Hmm...I should make one up right now... May 17 2004, 07:14 PM sharpieaddicteD i have one! haha it was stupid it was when i w... May 27 2004, 09:15 PM angel-roh mine is realllie weird and it might not make any s... May 28 2004, 04:07 AM ryfitaDF fourty-five houses
none of them have seen a day
ta... May 29 2004, 02:28 AM angel-roh haha that ones funny, ryfitaDF
mathiew is a jerk
... May 29 2004, 06:04 AM RiddleMeWonders Here's this one:
Mowed the lawn today
It was ... May 29 2004, 12:05 PM
LatinaLady those are cool. i some how findit hard to make my ... May 29 2004, 07:18 PM |
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