Haiku, post them up! |
Haiku, post them up! |
*NatiMarie* |
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Post up some of your haikus so that everyone can see them. They can be about whatever you want (keep them clean please, PG-13).
![]() Just in case you don't know what a Haiku is, it's common format consist of a poem that has 5 syllables in first line, 7 syllables the second, and 5 syllables the third. Here's an example one that I wrote a couple of months ago (it's longer, well it's not a Haiku, just a combination of three.): Breaking Loose by NatiMarie Trembling silence Fear of breaking the tether My inwardness lives Botheration kills Cringing while venerating Sluing in my pit Binging fearfulness Terminating hope, now gone Accruing demise |
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First one:
Why can't you see The painful tears in my eyes As you walked away Second one: We live together On this silly little world That some called the earth lol the first reflected my feelings not so long ago, and the second was just pure randomness, or as I like to call it, randomosity ^___^ |
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