Untitled and Untilted, it's been a while since I've written |
 Jan 3 2006, 11:52 AM
Post
#1
|
|
 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
I can hear the old birds sing
Like rejoice in something so simple as water A dripping flowing movement of sound I can smell the trees Cedar and pine, bleeding and mending Scarring with the vines I can feel the sun filter down through the canopy and warm selected areas of my body My face, my fingers, my knees... I can see the day beginning A slow walk of the sun I cannot see across that great expanse of sky The cold warmth of the damp ground beneath me as I lay A creature of the forest Safe and away from City's play |
|
|
|
 |
Replies
|
Jan 6 2006, 11:42 AM
Post
#2
|
|
 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
lindsay!
i missed your writing. i love it |
|
|
|
Posts in this topic
RiddleMeWonders Untitled and Untilted Jan 3 2006, 11:52 AM
illumineering Nature's ability to restore an urbanized spiri... Jan 3 2006, 05:15 PM azn_at_heart ^-^ jus like my back yard but what u said doesnt i... Jan 3 2006, 05:44 PM mipadi An adept use of visual imagery to convey an emotio... Jan 6 2006, 12:59 AM KissMe2408 Beautiful, absoloutly beautiful.
You barely post ... Jan 10 2006, 02:22 AM
RiddleMeWonders thank you guys so much for your encouraging commen... Jan 12 2006, 11:14 PM |
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: