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Haiku, post them up!
*NatiMarie*
post May 17 2004, 06:03 PM
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Post up some of your haikus so that everyone can see them. They can be about whatever you want (keep them clean please, PG-13).

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Just in case you don't know what a Haiku is, it's common format consist of a poem that has 5 syllables in first line, 7 syllables the second, and 5 syllables the third. Here's an example one that I wrote a couple of months ago (it's longer, well it's not a Haiku, just a combination of three.):

Breaking Loose
by NatiMarie

Trembling silence
Fear of breaking the tether
My inwardness lives

Botheration kills
Cringing while venerating
Sluing in my pit

Binging fearfulness
Terminating hope, now gone
Accruing demise
 
 
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*Kathleen*
post May 17 2004, 07:14 PM
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I like, Jose. Hmm...I should make one up right now. _smile.gif

We'll die together
Do not worry, I'm not scared
Because you love me

Haha sad, I know...here's another one I just thought up right now:

One day I shall rule
I'll punish all the meanies
They'll all burn and die
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(That one was for Kim)
 

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