the end / words |
 Jan 5 2006, 05:58 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
two poems i wrote whil eup very late one night
the end if more stuff started with the end it would save a whole lot on the shit in the middle but, if we were in the middle, then we wouldnt be because it has ended, see? then what would end? time? but there isnt any time at he end of time because its the end, see? so bring me a whiskey and a cigarette but you better hurry the end is nigh words the words make words into other words like if i said 'i' 'love' 'you' what doe sit mean? does the 'love' make the 'you' a part of 'i'? the other half of 'I'? which is weird, because 'I' is just a line and if you cut a lin in half, its two lines. so the two halves are wholes then 1 and 1 make two so 'we' arent one. but 'i' still 'love' 'you'. |
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Jan 5 2006, 06:44 PM
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 My desperate heart is far too weak to run for you this long. Group: Member Posts: 640 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 150,342 |
ooh i really love the second one. they are both "pondering" poems i think, with a lot of questions.
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racoons > you the end / words Jan 5 2006, 05:58 PM
racoons > you thank you = ) Jan 6 2006, 11:41 AM
[pshaa]shauna Wow, I really like "words"
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