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untitled layout, featuring marilyn monroe
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post Jan 3 2006, 11:04 PM
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Either going to be for a website or xanga. I like it but I feel as though something is missing so any suggestions you guys might have would be greatly appreciated. Oh! And it needs a title! I'd appreciate y'all's help with that as well.

Edit: Changed some stuff.



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post Jan 3 2006, 11:47 PM
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I like the concept. I'm not too sure about the blue in the background though. With the lines you have around Marilyn, I'm thinking maybe a bolder color for the bg. Oh, also, on her left boob, you can see some of the texturing, but the white on her suit is pretty much flat. I like the idea of contrasting the flat to texture, it's that little texture spot on her boob.

(Um, think I said 'boob' more this post than I ever have in any post). ermm.gif
 
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post Jan 4 2006, 12:04 AM
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QUOTE(fishcake-y @ Jan 3 2006, 11:15 PM)
Meh. I think it's a little too grungy on the texture. That&the lines are kinda overpowering. &the title should be, like... Sex Symbol. XD Or something.
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QUOTE(Zatanna @ Jan 3 2006, 11:47 PM)
I like the concept.  I'm not too sure about the blue in the background though. With the lines you have around Marilyn, I'm thinking maybe a bolder color for the bg.  Oh, also, on her left boob, you can see some of the texturing, but the white on her suit is pretty much flat.  I like the idea of contrasting the flat to texture, it's that little texture spot on her boob.

(Um, think I said 'boob' more this post than I ever have in any post).  ermm.gif
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Thanks for your suggestions. I agree with you, the background isn't bold enough. I'm working on finding another pattern right now.

Oh and how about "Va-Voom!" for a title?
 

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